《择天记》看鹿晗的颜就够了?老外小说党表示不服!

有译思 2018-08-12 08:46:28


上周末大家强烈要求英大出一篇《择天记》,于是我刷了一个礼拜的电视剧和英文小说!


表示,

简直被鹿晗的惊天美颜震住了!


温润如玉的 ↓


闭月羞花的↓


还有一低头的温油↓


试问剧中最美男主是谁?鹿晗是也!

再问剧中最美女主花落谁家?还是鹿晗!


就连古装剧中最经典的“美人出浴”桥段,也是鹿晗演的。


在鹿晗面前,自称“颜值最高”的古力娜扎,多少是有一点尴尬的吧。网友高呼,《择天记》实乃年度第一双女主大戏!


而剧里鹿晗和娜扎这对儿官配,堪称史上CP感最稀薄的小情侣。


两人见面隔着十万八千里。


“忧伤!男主比我还美……”


“来,让姐姐看看你的皮肤~”


“你抱着我,让观众朋友们评一评,到底谁的侧颜更美!”



相对来说,陈长生(鹿晗饰)和他的小徒弟落落(吴倩饰)更有CP感。


面对和自己年龄相仿、法术并不高、甚至连洗髓都没成功的长生,只因他救了自己一命、落落就非要拜师!


满脸都是撒娇的小女子情怀~


长生拒收礼物、拒收徒弟,落落干脆一屁股坐下来,实力演绎花式抱大腿!


花式抱大腿↓


花式抱大腿↓


太萌了有木有!!!!


得偿所愿,师父和徒弟的日常,又宠又甜!


落落生辰,长生送了她一整箱礼物,温润少年也有霸道总裁的一面↓

“每一件都想送给你,索性就全都送了。”天惹,这样的小公子请给我来一打好嘛!


关于剧情和里面的梗,也是有很多槽点的!


仙侠剧里的麦丽素,进可救人于危难,退可杀人于无形,实乃居家旅行之必备良药。


然而,《择天记》剧组不按套路走,感受一下这颗豪华加强版药丸↓↓


网友纷纷表示:心疼鹿晗!感觉小哥哥没被毒死,却要在这里被噎死了。


再看看大朝试里的文试↓


仙侠版《最强大脑》,古人诚不欺我!


接下来,英大带你们看看剧里的其他人物。


嚣张浮夸、双眼皮赶超达康书记、满脑子充满创意、长生的第一个好朋友、富家子弟唐三十六(曾舜晞饰)


傻傻笨笨、空有一身熊劲、长生的徒弟的徒弟轩辕破(高瀚宇饰)


精灵古怪、对长生充满信任、帮助他成功洗髓的小黑龙朱砂(林思意饰)


“老夫子版”老顽童、长生的师父计道人(曾志伟饰)


年轻气盛、冷漠骄傲,被奉为天之骄女的魔族公主南客(前方高能,这是姚笛!)


至于剧好不好看、演员们的演技好不好,英大不说话,就丢给你们一个豆瓣评分!


虽然评分如此,但挡不住鹿晗粉丝大军的力量啊!英大每天刷剧的时候,弹幕都是酱婶儿的↓


不得不说,这剧真的很火!

听听鹿晗粉都怎么说:

看颜就好了!你们要求那么多干嘛?


对此,老外小说党表示不服!

我们翻译的英文版《择天记》老好看了

要说老外对中国武侠/仙侠小说的热爱,那可是如滔滔江水连绵不绝啊!


还记得前段时间的新闻吗?美国男子读中国网络小说,成功戒掉毒瘾


英大随便在外网上一逛,就发现youtube上有外国友人上传的《择天记》“英文版片花”↓



仔细一听?这配音确定不是哈利·波特?

看来是老外小说党,按捺不住读书的寂寞了?


毕竟,他们当初可是在各大论坛翻译《择天记》,日以继夜不能自拔!


在所有的翻译版本中,我看到一个最完整的,来自大名鼎鼎的WuxiaWorld


英大仔细读了几章,别说,还真挺好看!

接下来,我就带你们鉴赏一二。



英文小说里,《择天记》是个什么故事?

4个字概括↓


所以电视剧版的英文名叫:

Fighter Of The Destiny


但外国人在翻译这部小说时,把它叫做:

Ze Tian Ji (Way of Choices)


因为他们写的故事梗概是酱婶儿的↓

To pick is to choose. This is a story about choices. Three thousand world full of gods and demons, with a daoist scroll in your hand, you are able to control the entire universe…


At the beginning of time, a mystical meteor came crashing down from outer space and scattered all over the world. A piece of it landed in the Eastern Continent


There were mysterious totems carved upon the meteor, and people gathered around it wanting to discover its usage. They discovered the Way, and established The Tradition.


Several thousand years later, the fourteen years old orphan Chen Changsheng left his master to cure his illness and change his fate. He brought a piece of marriage vow with him to the capital, thus began the journey of a rising hero.


词汇表:

demon['diːmən] n. 魔鬼

daoist scroll 道藏

meteor['miːtɪə] n. 流星

scatter['skætə] v.分散,散射

totem['təʊtəm] n.图腾,崇拜物

orphan['ɔːf(ə)n] n.孤儿

change his fate 逆天改命


简言之,就是一个关于选择的故事。

所以叫Way of Choices.



想看懂英文小说,你需要懂哪些黑话?

仙侠小说本身有着非常鲜明的中国文化特色,在翻译成英文时有一些“术语黑话”需要提前掌握。


英大根据读的这几章,给你们梳理了一个基础版教程。


《择天记》英文词汇表


神都 the capital

东土大陆 the Eastern Continent

小道士 the little Taoist priest

天道院 the Heavenly Academy

摘星学院 the Star Taker Academy

国教学院 the Tradition Academy

百草园 Herb Garden

大朝试 the Grand Examination/the Great Trial

三千道藏 the three thousand scrolls of way

命星 one's destined star

洗髓 Purification

神识 soul

师父 master

徒弟 apprentice/disciple

圣后 the Divine Empress

圣女峰 Holy Maiden Peak

天凤转世 the reincarnation of the Sky Phoenix

玄霜巨龙 the black dragon

寒潭 the cold pond

黑袍 a man in black robe


其余的词汇,就靠你们啦!



小说里有哪些精彩片段?

如果说电视剧是看脸的,那么小说则是看内涵。其细腻的笔触,可以让你感受到更精彩的人物情感和故事情节。


看完电视剧,英文小说理解起来就容易多啦。更何况,《择天记》英文版小说本身就通俗易懂,关键是真的很好看!


里面的精彩片段,我摘取几个分享给你们喔。

中文部分为英大英译中,大家做参考哈。


陈长生的外貌

That youngster wore a really old Taoist robe that had lost its color due to overwashing. 

那个年轻人穿着一件旧道袍。看样子,那道袍一定是穿了洗、洗了穿才褪色的。


He had a soft and immature face, upright eyebrows, and bright eyes, showing an inexpressible temperament that seemed as if he could see the truth of many things.

他的脸庞温润如玉、稚嫩纯净,剑眉星眼,气质神秘,仿佛能看穿一切。



简单的一小段描述,是不是立马在你心目中刻画出了一个陈长生的画像呢?对照小说这么一看,除了鹿晗,还真想不到其他合适人选……



徐有容的身世

Every Holy Maiden of the Southern Faith came from the Nan Xi (Southern Creeks) Institute. Because of this, the mountain that this sect was located on was named Holy Maiden Peak. And currently there is only one successor at the Nan Xi Institute.

南方的每个圣女,都来自南溪斋。因此,南溪斋坐落的山峰就被称为圣女峰。而今,南溪斋只有一位继承者。


That successor is a girl named Xu You Rong. She is the reincarnation of the Sky Phoenix. Her talent in cultivation was unmatched. She understood the essence of the Scriptures of The Way and arrived at Holy Maiden Peak when she was just twelve years old. 

这位继承者就是徐有容。她乃天凤转世,在修行方面的天赋无人能及。她12岁就到了圣女峰,一心向道。


All of the teachers and masters of Holy Maiden Peak were shocked and disregarded her status as a Zhou citizen and announced to the whole world: she will be the only female disciple of the Nan Xi Institute's inner circle. 

徐有容的天赋让圣女峰的前辈们惊叹!虽然她只是大周的普通子民,但他们昭告天下:她将成为南溪斋的唯一入室女弟子。


This meant that if there were to be no interference, this young girl named Xu You Rong would become the next Holy Maiden of the Southern Faith, a religious leader that can stand up to the North's Pope!

这就意味着,如果没有特别情况,徐有容将成为下一任南方圣女——圣女之位,可与北方皇帝相匹敌。



怎么样?徐有容这身世,还是挺厉害的吧?生下来就是要一心向道、拯救天下苍生的!天了噜简直是男版夜华君~



请记住我的名字!

这几天,微博上“名片”梗很火。

这傻狍子走到哪,都要强调“我叫陈长生”……


这是因为,最初到神将府退婚的时候,遭到了她们全府的傲慢待遇。自始至终,府里所有人都在想着怎么把他赶走,没有一个人问过他的名字。


对此,陈长生表示很愤怒:

“From entering the estate till now, whether the Madam or you, neither of you have asked for my name.”

“从我进入神将府直到现在,无论是徐夫人还是你,你们没有一个人问过我的名字。”


Chen Chang Sheng looked at her and said, seriously, “My name is Chen Chang Sheng. I know this name is really crude, but my master wished for me to live a long life. (Chang Sheng means longevity in Chinese) The intention is really nice, so I kept this name.”

陈长生看着她,郑重其事地说:“我的名字叫陈长生。虽然这个名字有点土,但我师父给我取这个名字,是希望我长命百岁。师父为了我好,所以我保留了这个名字。”


After saying these words, his eyes became bright and his attitude became decorous.

说完,长生的眼睛愈发明亮了,整个人又变得温文尔雅。



这段话,把温文尔雅的小少年富贵不能淫、威武不能屈的感觉写得活灵活现。英大瞬间爱上这位小公子啊喂!



落落拜师

“You misunderstood. These were not to thank you for saving my life.”

“你误解了。这些礼物不是为了感谢你救了我。”


Luo Luo pointed on the things on the floor and said “These are for an apprenticeship.”

落落指着地上的礼物,说:“这些东西是为了拜师修行。”


Chen Chang Sheng did not understand. “What?”

陈长生不明白:“什么?”


“I want to be your apprentice.”

“我想要做你的徒弟。”


Luo Luo looked into his eyes. She was very determined. “Master, I want you to be my master. I want to follow you and xiu xing.”

落落看着他的眼睛,神情十分坚决。“先生,我想让你当我的师父,我想跟着你学习修行。”


“Master, please accept me.”

“先生,你就收了我吧。”


She looked up, opened up her big watery eyes, looked at Chen Chang Sheng, said pathetically, “Whatever you want, I will give you all.”

她抬起头,用她水汪汪的大眼睛看着陈长生,可怜巴巴地求到:“只要你让我当你的徒弟,你要什么我都给你。”



怎么样,画面感扑面而来有木有↓



初遇小黑龙

下面这段描写,是陈长生初遇小黑龙。这时候,小黑龙还没变成人形,而是一条巨大的玄霜巨龙。


A terrifying black dragon slowly appeared in the air.

一条可怖的玄霜巨龙缓缓出现在空中。


It was looking down at Chen Chang Sheng. Its two eyes were like deathfire, cold and violent.

它那双眼睛像冥火一样冷厉、残暴,向下俯视着陈长生。


This was the highest life form out of all three thousand worlds. This was the coldest existence in this world. Its aura or pressure was unspeakable – aside from great xiuxingists who were out of this world, how could fragile humans stand before this giant black dragon?

这是大千世界上最高级的生物形态、也是最寒厉的存在,它的气场诡异不可描述。要不是世上最厉害的修行者,脆弱而普通的凡人又怎么敢站在这巨龙面前?


Even though Chen Chang Sheng had a strong mind, he still couldn't stand this pressure. He tightly closed up his mouth to prevent the sound of his teeth bumping to come out, yet he could not stop his body from trembling as if every single bone was crying.

虽然陈长生意志强大,但他也受不了这巨龙的压制。他紧闭嘴巴,生怕牙齿里有一丁点声音发出来惊扰了巨龙,但他控制不了自己发抖的身体,那种感觉,仿佛每一根骨头都在颤栗。



有没有很生动?玄霜巨龙的强大气场,弱小的陈长生的恐惧感,跃然纸上,精彩!



行了,英文小说的精彩片段就给大家分享到这里。想要完整版英文小说的小伙伴,扫下面的二维码领取即可哟。

↑英文小说《择天记》



你们都想读英文小说提高英语,《择天记》是多好的机会呀!


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